This is pretty good. Nice work!

Nice!

So what if it's made in GarageBand? Does that really mean that it's a bad song? It's no different in morality than using VST plugins in FL Sudio or anything else like that. I personally think that this is a great song, especially considering that it's the dude's first song. Keep it up man!

For a first, not bad.

While a little bland, it's really not all that bad. I haven't used GarageBand all that much, but for what he's got it's not bad at all. Just needs some work.

Doesn't sound like you did anything...

I swear, the guy below me is telling the truth... It's all ripped from garageband, especially the drums, my dad used those...
The beggining is also a little to harsh, and the sudden jump in to the main melody is a little annoying, it's also to short...

nothing out of the ordinary

I recognise all the piano samples from Garage Band.