Good intentions

Your melody would sound so much better if you used some better synths. I liked the overall song, not so much your choice of synths. Try using the FPC a bit more, you can find some better drum sounds there. And Sytrus is your friend! I heard a lot of SimSynth sounds in there, and I didn't really like it. Once you get some experience, though, I'm sure you're going to be putting out some really cool shit. Just play with every knob you see and listen to what they do. You'll find something you like. I'm looking forward to hearing more from you as you become better.

NICE MAN!

IT COULD USE SOME PRO SOUNDS BUT IT SOUNDED SOMEWHAT AWSOME TO ME!!!

this is sweet

It get a little crowded at 00:59

the beginning was nicely put together man

you can do better and keep up the good job!