Good intentions
Your melody would sound so much better if you used some better synths. I liked the overall song, not so much your choice of synths. Try using the FPC a bit more, you can find some better drum sounds there. And Sytrus is your friend! I heard a lot of SimSynth sounds in there, and I didn't really like it. Once you get some experience, though, I'm sure you're going to be putting out some really cool shit. Just play with every knob you see and listen to what they do. You'll find something you like. I'm looking forward to hearing more from you as you become better.