trouble on my mind

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very nice

doesn't sound like you need much advice at all! only thing I'd really like to hear different is a real piano... if you could do that, this track would be golden.

jcorishas responds:

I appreciate the review. I might add a real piano to beginning maybe as an overdub.

Very good.

Love the arrangement you threw in this song. I could picture this with vocals on the radio. Keep it up, love the piano.

jcorishas responds:

Thanks. I've been toying around with putting some vocals for the final version (an acapella or something) but nothing really goes with it. If anyone wants to put vocals over it they can and I'd love to hear it.


Quite the musical genius you are. The mood is perfectly set, I can't believe this isn't done.

Nice drum work.

jcorishas responds:

I wouldn't call myself a musical genius but thanks anyway. This track was more luck than anything else. The drum work is some of my best but they still need a few touch ups (normalizing, more variety, etc.). I'm experimenting with the second half, going for something unexpected.

I really like this one

great work, like the melody you should really finish this.
The piano work great.

jcorishas responds:

Thanks man, will do.

This is really cool

Very good use of instruments. The percussion is great. I like how it started off with piano and then it got interesting almost like a climax and then it went back with piano. This does sound hip-hop. Nice work!

jcorishas responds:

Thanks for listening. I'm glad someone liked it. When I'm finished tweaking it I'll post the final version.

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Sep 29, 2007
11:56 AM EDT
Hip Hop - Modern
File Info
1.7 MB
1 min 50 sec

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