Its not bad
I do think however you put to much into it.. I mean some instruments are louder then they should be (do mind my mispelling if i have any). Its not bad just didn't really press my button.
It seems more of an amalgamation...
Don't get me wrong, I could definitely feel the intent to recreate the Zelda theme into a more intuitive form, but your choice of instruments was not exactly a fitting combination. The harsh bass tunes contradicted the lighter, airy "dings", making the piece as a whole sound a bit... disorganized, if you will.
Of particular notice is the very final few seconds, in which all the instruments appear to "spring" into a fortissimo of sound that sounds more like it was thrown together for mass effect than pure closure.
This is not meant to insult your ability as a music artist, but rather to point out that the variosity in sounds was simply TOO different to create a good harmony. If there were only ONE thing you change about this, I would highly suggest it be the bass selection. Even something as simple as a low drum solo without the rough edge would likely add more transient flavor to this submission.
I liked it alot mostly cause i recognize the tune. However I feel that you should take more artiistic liberty and make the song your own.
dont stop ill be waiting for more from you.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.