Might as well review what you think is your best
electronic song that is...
I think you have way too much distortion....no you do have too much. It's either that or your cutoff dial is screaming to the max. The intro was just too messy. I did notice the panning of the percussion so that I commend you on. Okay so you got the kick the nice bass, but fix those higher frequency instruments.
At 2:23 let the randomness come in. Prior to that point the flow of the song was decent, but this part just sounds like you mashed the key as fast as you can randomly. I never did like gabber.
Meh, everything just seems not well composed. I understand the numerous melodies going which increases the difficulty in making the song, but you have to make the melodies match well together. This looks like an old song of yours so you probably fixed up on your mistakes. Your ambient stuff sounds more ordered. I'll have to hear your recent electronic stuff to see what you still need to improve on. No hard feelings on the score I hope. See yah.
I did the massive screaming distortion on purpose cause I was like "YEAH!" And that fast section a similar reason (mashed the key as fast as I could huh? Wanna bet!?:). I know I should probably try for more order and less crazy shit to relate to the listener a bit better. I'm just very experimental is all. I also have an electronic piece under construction right now too but judging from this review you'll HATE it-- it could not possibly be breaking any more rules. Hope to see you later.
PS. No, and no hard feelings on the score either. Thanks for the review.
Dark. I like it alot. Keep up the good work.
thankyou. Ha i was getting bored by 2:20 thats why its a bit frantic. Doin my best to keep it up!
It doesn't stop!
Just reviewed "Yeti is a Pothead" thinking maybe you were a one-hit wonder, but dangit, you just crank them out... once again, simply amazing. Maybe in the middle, during the accelerated period where it sounds like the melody is held with a sawtooth lead, perhaps you could have used a square lead for a less abrasive sound... just a thought :-) other than that, another good solid 5 from me.
Thanks a lot for your encouragement. I only started submitting stuff a few days ago and you are my first reviewer. Deathkavaderva -loves- you
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