lol, every artist writing music wants to share a little bit of the feeling they get from their own work. When you say "I hope other people like it," I get you. Track is awesome. Melodies have good structure to them. The song moves from one idea to the next very smoothly. I can't give any advice on how to chiptune, I actually suck at the genre.
You have a strength for writing full bodied melodies. The chord progressions share smart space with cute leads. It feels refreshing to hear a drum rhythm without a bass drum. Snare and hi hat doing all the work :p