hmmm

i didnt really like it,.. but it was all right

Weak...

Maybe I dont like dance music but this doesn't get interesting at all. There's nothing wrong with it per se... I'd just add a lot more, make a few stronger sounds if it were mine. It got got cool at a certain point but not that cool. My opinion is you should have a lot more going on, so much more overlapping that the sound would be different then this one, although the same notes. Has much a lot of potential, considering you have a good idea down.