I thought it was pretty good. The guitar sounds pretty synthetic but the melodies are nice. The rhythm was sexy man. Good polyrhythms. I thought the parts at 1:05 and 1:46 were a little out of place. They didn't sound like they belonged in the song...but how you take that remark is your call. You can keep the section in there. It isn't bad or anything, it just sounds like it belongs in another song. The ending was kind of weak. Just one chord on the piano? You could have done better I'm sure.
All in all, it's an all right song. I gave it a five because it got down voted but it probably deserved a three in it's current state. I will take note that this version is "unfinished." Fix the few elements in this song that don't work to it's advantage and you could have a killer track right here.