needs work

It's too "busy" towards the beginning.
Not to mention the fact that you've made a techno/electronic version of a more Caribbean-sounding song. The end result is trying to be two very different things at once.

If this is..

Drake's tune then you have'nt even played advancewars.... i hope you make andy's tune but if you do let it sound a litle original... and not like this i have played the advancewars series but i dont remember this...oh wait at 1.30 i hear it.. and it sound TERIBLE...

lol

I fail to find a tune in this...I fear I might kill myself if this ever gets stuck in my head, dawg.