My opinion.

It would sound better if you funke with a drum beat during the begining. The ending was the shit. You hit some bad nice notes there.
For a sound test I enjoyed it.

Sexy Jam

For just being a jam, it sounded really nice. I'd love to hear something you concentrated to complete. To previous reviewer - I dug deep for ideas, thought long and hard, consulted wise-men, prayed about it, meditated for days and came up with a solution to it being loud. Turn it down. It doesn't cause distortion, clarity is fine.

It's A Bit Loud and Unorganised...

But other than that it's a pretty good submission. It's definitely above average, however I would like to hear you jam out like this sober. I bet it would sound better than this and even rank among the all time top 50. Keep up the good work and good luck on yer future submissions.