was playing around with garage band and i came up with this
O_o
When the guitar line cut in, I was thinking "HOLY CRAP THIS IS AMAZING!"
Good job ('course, I saw holycrapthisisamazing to just about every piece...that isn't mine...xD)
Seriously though...if you add drums (like KerfuffleMach2 suggested) mebbe it'd be better.
(p.s. WHAT SONG IS THAT!?!?!? I KNOW IT BUT I CAN'T PUT MY FINGER ON IT >.< plz pm me teh answarz)
(p.p.s. 5/5 10/10 faved)
Not bad.
As I listened to this, I kept expecting drums to kick in at any time. This is a good start, but you could turn this into a longer and better song.
you are totally right. i am actually still working on this because although at the time i felt it was completed. since completing my Sail Away piece i just feel it need ALOT of work. thanks for your response
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.
GallagherProductions 
