The :30 is where everything in the song starts to come together. But honestly the contrast between the happy and the sad in such short time does kind of throw me off?
This is so hard giving you bad criticism! The song is fire for experiencing experimental rhythm haste a time where people might actually :/ think like this!
Keep it up, happy to sad in 90 seconds is like eh! ITSELF IN AND FOR the future man, mark my words. You gots its kiddo. Its aint nothin yous evah gonna see pop up on shelves at no deparhtmint center grocery corner joint nithersss! “Its” alllllll youuuu got!