VAC13 Judge Review

For 5 days into voice acting this is well made. You've chosen an interesting contrast of the Derek gruff tough guy and Aaron the skeevy dude (who reminds me of Grima Wormtongue from LotR for general creep level). Aaron has a nice minion vibe to him, and the muffled background struggle during the sacrifice lends well to the theme.

To improve, at 1:15 where Derek seems to have a hand over his mouth. There doesn't seem to be a clear instigation of the struggle, as he goes from talking to muffled protest. Something like a sound of scuffling or a meaty sucker punch to instigate how a character I visualize as being a brodude gets bested by someone likely half his size.

Sent you a scout invite, welcome to NG. Good luck!

I think your voice acting is quite good. Funny enough, they all three have some spooky/creepy voices and both character's names start with an E.

I think the story and sound could be improved but since it is made for a contest, I don't know if I should suggest any idea for improvement, yet.

Otherwise, it is a nice little audio clip