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[Dj-U] Internal Error

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Author Comments

Mah first DnB song, I need to get better, REVIEW, Thanks to Boney-man for the help

Reviews


z0mg

dUd3, th1s has g0t to be the best song i've eva list3nd t0.
It's a freaken masterpiece. It's a perfect s0ng to listen to wen were play1n with our c0mp mainframe.
Keep up the sw33t w0rk!!! 5* 10/0
-KotorUs_



I feel it.

I really like how you introduce the track with drums only; sets up the track nicely. The synths you use seem a plain; simple sound waves with no effects or altering whatsoever (other than the detuning, of course).

The song works itself into a "killer rampage" filler, which I liked. When the drums came in at 1:02, I felt that they felt really weak and short; in your case, using that loop for the main beat was a good idea since it sounded full and like it fit with the dirty killer theme. But when you sliced it like at 1:02, it was unfulfilling and empty. I'd suggest using samples for your drums instead of a sliced loop for that part, or even possibly the entire song.

Keep it easy;

-Zenon



yah

Very robotic drum programmin', some great synthage but they are way too overloaded and messes the track up completely. Gatedness is cool. Could use some drummage after the 8 first bars with that though, not only the 16they

no really it's nice


Dj-UnKnOwN responds:

Thanks a lot for the help =D. yeah i wasnt sure weather i could submitt my [Dj-U] After Hours since i use samples that i took out of the halloween techno music. Ah well it's fine, this one will do. Anyway, since this was my first DnB i didnt really know what i was doing, and boney-man was walking me through it but he could'nt hold my hand the entire way =P
Thanks for the review
Dj-Unknown


Why haven't I reviewed this already?

Well, seeing as you're mostly a trance guy, this is great ofr a first DnB. Most trance guys who make their first "DnBs" have trance beats, you know? Like with a thumping kick. Anyway, the reece sounds pretty nice in this. I like that other gated synth too. But the bells really added to it, they sound great. Make more DnB!

~boney_man
5/5
10/10
+ No d/l 'cause I have 3 versions of it already :D


Dj-UnKnOwN responds:

heh, thanks for the advice man =] haha you told me to watch out for the thumping kicks, so i made sure there wasnt any.. hahaha


nice

Wow, do more DnB dude!

-A New Decade


Dj-UnKnOwN responds:

heh, thanks man =]
Dj-Unknown

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Credits & Info

Dj-UnKnOwN
Author

Listens
2,016
Downloads
177
Votes
64
Score
4.35 / 5.00

Uploaded
Sep 17, 2007
7:27 PM EDT
Genre
Drum N Bass
File Info
Song
3.2 MB
2 min 1 sec

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