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D4 - Why do i feel so alone

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Uploaded
Sep 17, 2007 | 5:51 PM EDT
File Info
Song
3.1 MB
3 min 25 sec
Score
3.40 / 5.00

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Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.

Score:
Rated 3.40 / 5 stars
Plays & Downloads:
528 Plays | 88 Downloads
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Genres:
Electronic - Techno
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Author Comments

An FLP that a mate gave me so just carried it off

Reviews


DjKaiDjKai

Rated 5 / 5 stars

its vary cool song you did keep up the work

its vary cool song you did keep up the work



ValtrixValtrix

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

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I know that you were using a file from a friend, so likely you were just expanding on this for fun. However, I feel like giving you some feedback anyway :P

I really liked the intro, and the two synth melodies were good. However, you just kept repeating the second one over and over. That'd maybe work for your chorus, but I was really hoping to hear some more melodies. When the pitch shifted at about 1:45, it didn't quite sound right either. Instead, it may have worked better to switch to a new melody line.

The flow also didn't really seem there for me. And, I sometimes was wishing for more to the song. The kicks didn't really seem powerful enough to justify just having them as your main beat. Then the end, the melody just faded in and out without much purpose, leading to a ending that didn't quite feel resolved...

So yeah, that's what I have for you as suggestions. There are some cool things in this song, but it's easier to offer up constructive criticism. If you could check out some of my songs sometime, that'd be great too :D


Deefour responds:

Hey yea that was a nice review =]

Coming on to my kiks, thats all i have, trying my hardest to get some new ones but finding it hard...
and yea could change the mell, might haveago tomorow =]

Ill go check yours out now =] thanks again for the review

D4


jakk22jakk22

Rated 5 / 5 stars

sweet

really technoie but awesome!


Deefour responds:

Lol "Really technoie?" it is a techno song lol :P gald you liked it tho :D

D4