The first part is super crap, no rhythm at all. It gets more songlike at 0:46, I even recognized a melody. Third part isn't too good either, and the ending... OMG do something about that whining! However it must've been hard to make it hurt this much so I'll give ya a 5/10. I think the best thing to do would be to cut off the whole beginning and end, and submit the middle part as a loop. Some insane screaming and yelling would add much to the effect, but that's not something you can make with FL:)
its grindcore man... supposed to be terrible
Bring out the energy...!
it hurts your ears seriously, theres just too much going on, and its a little loud.