Wow! boy... I love it. This is very profound shit.... It's pure Pink Floyd if Sid was with us. It touched the place I thought it was long gone. I can't express to you how much I appreciate that anyone would make music like this nowadays.
OK, as for technicalities, the lyrics are great, but I can't understand some of it. Enounce? "To say that I wasn't there for you, but the price is still unpaid?" Awesome! but I'm not sure I got the words just right.
I like the rhythm guitar, and the transitions from major to minor. Kind of like Sid Barrett would on Emily Play, or Bike, or Interstellar Overdrive. Lyrics themselves are great, perhaps, just as a suggestion, maybe should be more directed to the audience, and less to self.
Instrumental, it's good production, but I would add more synth layers to fat the whole thing up.
Most importantly, a great piece like this really begs for a great guitar solo in the middle. It would pump the fuck out of it, and enhance the message.
If you are ever up for it, I would do collab with you on a song to two. Not to self promote, but my guitar is above average. I could add ye guitar parts to your lyrics, like no one else.
in any case, it is great to see you on NG. This kind of vibe is exactly why I start making making my own music, cause no one else would. But you are doing it, man.
Please keep it alive!