Decent

~~REVIEW~~
Hmm this was interesting and it does show some good effort on your part the "VOCALS" could use some fine tunning but thats just with time, but for the most part you have it down, and you did bring it together, i love the music part of it aswell especially at the start allthough seemed abit slow maybe speed up the begenning of it just a bit, so with all that and suggested its was notbad, but could use more effort.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
the beginning was a bit slow speed it up abit, also vocals are great here on this but could be fine tuned

It is epic

This has so much going on it is a bit hard to understand what is even being said! Of course, you could say that about a lot of songs, I suppose. It is amazing how many themes this goes through in the talking and non-talking parts. You sound just like what a grunge group sounded back then. Given the fact that this was made with modern technology, it does a good job of updating it. It's a little long, but it's still a genuinely good thing to listen to.

There seem to be a lot of intermissions in this. I am going to admit right now that I am not a fan of grunge, I just never was. This, however, should please all fans of the genre. It certainly sounds like you were imitating a typical teenager with feelings of rebellion, love, and lust. I am not a fan of those themes, but you did put emotion into this.

All of it.

I have a separate playlist for your music. My day goes: What do I want to listen to? Rock? Metal? Techno? Gunshy?....Gunshy.

I seem to be synth-immune.

Or it could be due to me creating feedback loops on the music room keyboards all afternoon that has given me a tolerance to it. Whatever, the synth leads are immense. You have colossal skill, I have to say.
The chorus can only be described as eargasmic, you could be a catalyst for a whole punk revival. Just get an album out there!
I don't mind the length. Long grunge is good. Keep it up, you have another song favourited.

thanks

i used your music for my animation...please watch it.the name is son's revenge....