I can only give you 6 points out of ten. I explain: the work itself is quite consistent with the genre in which it was written. It's nice that there are chiptune elements. However! There is no dynamics at all, there are no specific elements that emphasize the brightness of acceleration, only the melody and the drum part. This is very frustrating of course. And I would make the existing progression a little more vivid by increasing the instrumentalization. It's not difficult. Work on it.

Noice