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I don't care that it's bad, because it's my first full length song! Woooooooooooooooooooooo

Took 5 hours.

Also, apologies for the weird cracking and clicking. I've tried my best to get rid of them.

Renamed from "Maeror" for the memes (hi Godzillapple)

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I dig the mouse-click samples in the beginning, I've never heard that used in a song before. I think you should try incorporating it more somehow, really mess with it. For a reference (if you're curious) check out "The Bomb" by Neuroticfish. It starts with an old dial-up sound that gets integrated into the intro real creatively.
As for the rest, this is excellent. I'm a bit old (30) but half of my life ago I started with FL Studio and this really reminded me of those weird late night or early morning sessions in which I would make things very similar to this. My early FL Studio work isn't on NewGrounds, but you've definitely got a better first full-length song. I don't have much constructive criticism, it was just nice to hear your work, great job!

TheVenturer responds:

This is a really positive review, thank you! I'm honored to have a veteran here c:

This one felt nostalgic, especially the old school drumplay.

TheVenturer responds:

Liquid DnB does ignite a some sort of melancholic feeling, I hope to get better at the genre in the future. This was my first attempt. Thanks for the review!

Not amazing but not completely garbage either. I feel like this song just needs 2 things; better mixing, and more variation. For the mixing part I feel like you maybe could of done something more with the drums cause they just kinda seemed to appear out of no where and sounded a bit out of place for me, like maybe add a bit of vintage to it? Idk just sounds a bit out of place, also I feel like the melody should be a bit louder as the drums are almost drowning it out. Now for the variation I feel like wasn’t too bad, all I had a problem was the 45-2:05 section was just the sam drums and melody repeating for about a minute although I like how you added some background synths I still feel like it just needed a bit more. Congrats on your first full track and very valid attempt. Good luck with future projects!

TheVenturer responds:

Your mixing complaints are valid as I am currently producing on cheap earphones, in a few weeks I'm hoping to get at least some okay headphones. To be honest, with all my previous projects I just built upon what I previously had, but here I had a few scattered ideas that in the end weren't very well connected.

Very thankful for your response, I hope this is a start of a journey indeed :)

not bad for your first track.
and 5 hours(for me at least) is too little lol.
Some parts need some more elements, and possibly add some dynamics in the track.
cow fish out lmao ksja

TheVenturer responds:

Ah yes, I removed the dynamicness in the pad because of the stupid clicking sounds. Otherwise I guess I was just eager to finish this thing.

Nice try :)

TheVenturer responds:

You really don't have to write a response like this when rating a submission this low. Unless you have any pointers for improvement.

Credits & Info


4.05 / 5.00

Sep 5, 2020
1:23 PM EDT
Drum N Bass
File Info
5 MB
3 min 37 sec
  • FL Studio 20

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