Again - Rework

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Again - Rework

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This was originally an acoustic piece from a couple years ago, but decided to touch it up a bit. Will add vocals soon. Hope you enjoy it!

Lyrics:

Again

I'm breaking down

I won't be back...

Please don't follow me

No light or sound

On this beaten path...

Getting harder to breathe

So I walk this road

It's cold and it's lonely

No place left to go

For the shadows know me

Oh, and in my shame I break

I fled...in fear...

Again...Oh again...

And what I'd give

To be myself...

Myself once again

It's over now

I'm beyond help...

Lost and distant

In the dark I fall

On my own...

The fate to fail I face

It's all the same

When you're alone...

Discomfort in my faith

So I walk this road

It's cold and it's lonely

No place left to go

For the shadows know me

Oh, and in my shame I break

I fled...in fear...

Again...Oh again...

I'm breaking down

I won't be back...

Please don't follow me

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VulpesHilarianus

2020-09-06 01:03:21

Some of the timing is a bit off, and the guitar sounds a slight bit out of tune. But the underlying chord progression's great. I'd add another guitar that's panned off to one side to hold a sustained note and fill in some of the empty space, though that might not work once the vocals are added.

bipolarmunkey responds:

Thanks for listening! I actually fixed those problems like the timing and stuff in the version with vocals if you care to check it out. Thanks for taking the time to review!