The meaning to this song is really good, but it sounds so much better when you get really into it and deep during just a few parts of the song. It would be really great if when you sung it, you sang in that deeper voice, because you sound really light and I had turn up the volume to hear you well. A few good transition notes would make the guitar flow smoother, because at some points it stops and doesn't sound as good as it could.
This is a good song, but just a few adjustments would make it great.
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