The intro to this song was so cool! And the beat was really nice and... fly. Great job!
This awfully sounds like a beat similar to basshunter. That vox is sweet. How you make that? Pretty good for making this over a weekend. Overall this is what I thought:
-vox is great
-like the energy in this song (fuzziness synths are a joy ride)
-song seems to flow well (good transitions)
-I don't sense any random mashing of the keyboard. (A well though of composition though sounds familiar)
-quite similar to basshunter (lacks completely originality)
-bass sounds generic (or if not I heard similar bass instruments that sound the same as yours)
-bit repetitive (I guess techno and trance are just like that, but I think you could have transitioned into one more new section of composition.)
-last section at 1:40 to end...really did you have to make it drag on for another24 seconds?
That's my comments to you. As always have fun making music...your friend too. Here is a 9 star and 5/5 vote. Bye for now