New?
Sound good yet I have a weird feeling you used generic instruments or pre-recorded loops. I hope I'm wrong. Good vox and good sounds. Needs more stuff. Bland with only 1 lead instrument and no harmonies supporting. Here is my summary.
1) Too empty song. More reverb could fix this.
2) Vox sounds random at times. The voice keeps changing like another person is singing. Make it so that the same guy is singing for a decently long time.
3) Sounds unoriginal. A lot of beats are familiar.
4) Fx could have been used better. The fx plays and lasts for 1 second and just stops. Now I have to wait a while before one more short fx sound.
5) Song is not dancy. It has a classic 80s soft rock feel.
Good try. Still lacking in a few areas. A respectful 8 stars.