You seem to be a quite good opponent in terms of cinematic music!
Fantastic piece even though it's a bit short, haha.
There are only a few minor things for criticism, which would be the following:
- The flutes and especially the piccolo deserve more power, it's hard to hear them. The piccolo could be played one octave higher, since it's what the instrument is made for - to play the highest notes in the orchestra. :P
- The drum set sounds a bit off-mix - basically too dry. The orchestra itself sounds like played in a concert hall, which is very good. The drum kit however sounds like it was played separately and added afterwards. It sounds a bit too central and needs a bit of the hall effect to sound like it was part of the entire mix.
Can't wait to see what you have composed for the finals. Good luck. :)