~~~~This is an official review from an NGUAC judge for the 2020 NGUAC Knock-out round!!~~~~
These guys said it all really. Hard to elaborate more on them but I will try! :D
I like the instrumentation, i love the harpsichord? I think it a harpsichord. and i love the feeling and style and overall atmosphere. However the whole things feels like a big tension build up for a long scene in a movie where the main characters are planning for a grueling and possibly deadly task and all of them are just looking at eachother silently, preparing their gear and realizing they might not make it out alive. and then they all just, very slowly stop preparing and decide they dont want to do the thing. and then they go to sleep.
It creates a great picture! and then the tension you build up just leads to the same amount of tension with no release or climax. This was definitely what made the song lack depth and interest for me. I also wanted to hear a catchy melody or variation in your chord progression. Great overall idea!
Thanks for your submission!