choppy

the violin part is a little choppy, and the backround chords should fade out instead of just stop, it's just musically offensive to me...i mean it's like saying the f bomb or anything, but it gives the whole piece a feeling of "what the heck is going on?" You have this beautiful smooth melody that is getting this pretty echo from a flute breaking the sadness and moving the piece along, but then you have these haulting chords...it just doesn't make sence. And i believe that the flute is competeing just a bit much with the melody towards the end. maybe make it a little quiter or just less busy...or even down an octave. But overall pretty good work,

pleasant

very nice sounding piece. lovely melody that would be good for credits or a funeral. something ending. well done