It's a solid song and I enjoyed it. One thing that could be worked on is the transition between the quiet part and the exciting middle part (~1:16). Either the quiet part should be a little more softer (especially the kick, since it's the same volume in both sections), or the transition to the louder sections should be more impactful (maybe a louder riser, or more riser/impact sounds).
Maybe this is helpful. I like :)