Really cool

Keep up the good work :)

Good job bruh.

Genial :O

Obligatory sex jokes aside: it's the feeling of 'variations of distance' or the 'words between lines' of it. Thinking you need to add something in excess might be why the intensity hazes out: My recommendation is throwing some space for reflection in there, like ATB's "A Fine Day" or those sections of rest in Daft Punk.
Probably wouldn't hurt to throw up a cheap mic for vocals and blending it into artificiality, it'd add allot more detail to see and convey more for less with.

In short: "The is space and non-space *puffs pipe staring into onto distant mountains* to be both full, a universe must have each, or there is nowhere to go, and there would be everything but freedom!" *Camera pans out to reveal Scottish kilt, cap, and bastard sword*