I like the echo-y vocals and relaxed guitars at the beginning. The clap sample is a bit cheesy, and the vocal editing isn’t perfect, but I like the lyrics (thanks for the translation!). The vocals sit well in the mix, but could also blend better given all the layering. Reverb could do a bit of that work, but in some cases you might consider re-recording, especially in places where the backing vocals seem to have a slightly different inflection as the lead. There are also moments when the calibration is a little off, like at 2:53. I like the mellow, spacey breakdown at 2:15, and structurally the piece works pretty well. I was also a fan of the melodic “yah-yah” flourish at 3:35 and other places. The production quality is also solid overall. I think my main complaint here is that the vocal editing is a bit rough around the edges, but the instrumental tracks could also use some more variety at times. Still, solid work with the mixing, atmosphere, and progression. Keep at it, Ragkul! :)
Mixing, mastering, and balance
1.5/2
Structure, transitions, phrasing, and variety
1.25/1.5
Melody, tonality, harmony, and texture
1.5/2
Instrumentation and sound design
.5/1
Emotion, atmosphere, and catchiness
1.25/1.5
Originality and uniqueness
.75/1
Overall (how do the elements above interact?)
.25/1
Composite score
7/10
Ragkul 
