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The Last Petal

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For Ravenland Project.

Cover by Hellzy.

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I like the heavy piano chords at the beginning and the dark, foreboding tone. The reverb might’ve been a tad too heavy for my tastes - it’s either that or the chord spacing that’s distorting the piano a bit at :10 or so. The melodies are nice, although there could’ve been a bit more variety in the instrumentation, especially early on. The kick drum at :37 sounds a tad too heavy for a piece like this, but it still helps give an extra little punchiness to an otherwise very flowing piece. The vocals and strings at 1:15 add a nice bit of variety, and the violin chords at 2:00 are a nice touch. I think what this piece needs compositionally is a stronger sense of direction. The sound design has a great potential for emotional impact, but in order to capitalize on that you need more dynamic contrast and phrasing - gradual build-ups and breakdowns that give the piece a stronger narrative flow. Otherwise, you’ve pushed all the right buttons here with the production quality, harmonies, and atmosphere. Strong work, 4203! ^^

Mixing, mastering, and balance
2/2
Structure, transitions, phrasing, and variety
1/1.5
Melody, tonality, harmony, and texture
2/2
Instrumentation and sound design
1/1
Emotion, atmosphere, and catchiness
1.25/1.5
Originality and uniqueness
1/1
Overall (how do the elements above interact?)
.75/1
Composite score
9/10

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Downloads
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Votes
11
Score
4.21 / 5.00

Uploaded
Jul 29, 2020
10:56 AM EDT
Genre
Classical
File Info
Song
4.7 MB
3 min 25 sec

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