I like the gritty texture at the beginning and the build-up into :30. The texture and sound design are both really creative, and the mix is clean and loud. The rhythmic content is enjoyable, but there could’ve been a little more depth to the harmonies here. Later on, I was looking for a little more variety and shape to the composition. The repetitive vocal samples at 2:12 were a little overdone, and the composition lacks a narrative arc or sense of development over time. You’re certainly a talented producer, and the instrumentation here is really cool, but the composition needs more fleshing out imo. Keep at it, PeaZen1! :)

Mixing, mastering, and balance
1.75/2
Structure, transitions, phrasing, and variety
.75/1.5
Melody, tonality, harmony, and texture
.5/2
Instrumentation and sound design
.75/1
Emotion, atmosphere, and catchiness
1.25/1.5
Originality and uniqueness
.75/1
Overall (how do the elements above interact?)
.5/1
Composite score
6.25/10

Great song! The drum build up in the beginning could be a bit shorter imo