I'd like to hear what your thought process was when you were creating this piece. Why call it Zap? Why choose the thumbnail art you did for this piece? Knowing all of this information will allow me to help you more effectively, as I would judge based on how clearly I thought your intent came across rather than simply judging by my own taste. It could also affect my rating's accuracy.
I highly recommend putting that information in the description in the future.
More info about how I review music here: https://codefreq.newgrounds.com/news/post/1089806
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