I like the tranquil mood at the beginning and the melodies at :16. The piece is a little slow to progress, though, and the mix is very quiet. I like the pizzicato strings at 1:20, but they don’t add much in the way of novel harmonic content. The legato strings at 1:35 do, but they also drown out the other elements a bit. You might need to use more equalizers to keep the frequencies of each instrument more distinct. I would’ve liked to hear some more structural contrast in the piece, with some more gradual transitions and more variety in the harmonies. I also thought the fade-out ending was a bit lazy. Still, I enjoyed the sound design and atmosphere of this one. Keep at it, NNmusic! :)

Mixing, mastering, and balance
1.25/2
Structure, transitions, phrasing, and variety
.75/1.5
Melody, tonality, harmony, and texture
1.5/2
Instrumentation and sound design
.75/1
Emotion, atmosphere, and catchiness
1.25/1.5
Originality and uniqueness
.75/1
Overall (how do the elements above interact?)
.5/1
Composite score
6.75/10