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Author Comments

first rock song. if you cant tell, Ive been listening to a lot of Circa Survive lately lol



I feel the opposite of the reviewer below me. I don't mind the synth sounds so much (probably because I don't play real guitar). It's your composition that's bad. No instrument in the galaxy can make up for that. You use the same riff over and over and over AND OVER AND OVER with the same drum beat and same bass line. The riff was decent, but not for dozens of times in a row. When you do occasionally throw something different in there, it sounds okay. Always remember: the essence of boredom is repetition. Unless you were trying to bore everyone, you have a lot of work to do. Maybe if this song had only been two minutes, you'd have been fine, but alas it's much longer than that. Better luck next time.

Experiment-D responds:

im tryin
ill redo it sometime
thanks for the review

Nice arrangement, awful guitars.

Please, why is everybody using these malicious Slayer-VST-FL-Studio-guitars? If you ever listened to rock music you would notice that they do NOT in any way sound like real guitars but like synthesizer bullshit. No offense.

The arrangement and composition is okay - up to a certain point, not superb, but okay. The drums are a bit monotonous, a bit variation would be helpful.

The song quality really decreases rapidly at 01:46. Instead of variating your song with new riffs or melodies, you keep adding really cheaply sounding synthesizers - they seep completely out of place in a song which is supposed to sound like rock. This can especially be seen at 03:16 when this really cheap Sytrus preset lead synthesizer plays alone. Use something more quiet and delightful here, a piano, perhaps a clean guitar or harp - but not these awfully cheap VST presets.

Variation and better instrumentation are the keywords here. The song isn't bad, just not good executed. You have the talent to do so, so search for some guitar players and keep rocking :)

Experiment-D responds:

well unlike some people
i dont have the recording equipment to add in real guitar
ive been playing for 6 years
id love to add my own ( i know itd sound way better with my own guitars not synth shit)
im stuck with this for now
and i know the quality sucks
cuz of the 8k policy i had to downsize the file

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Credits & Info

3.34 / 5.00

Sep 4, 2007
11:40 AM EDT
General Rock
File Info
7.5 MB
4 min 40 sec

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