different
not so sure it is a techno. but it is still nice to sit down and not worry about being blasted away by bass the entire time. wortht he listen for sure!
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You know...wtf would you catagorize this one as? I never really thought about it but I am unsure as to where to stick this one...................see ms to be my biggest problem sometimes ><.
Cosmos8942 responds:
:D...I don't know what to put this under though T.T.
At first I thought it needed Bass...then I asked around...apparently it was good enough without it, surprised me a little :O.
Anyhow, thanks for the review and the 9/10, once I get the time (and the computer) I will start making music again...till later :].
-AJ-
Very interesting!
I loved the combination of instruments you used. You choose the perfect synth and piano instruments for this one! Ok... I am trying to see something that needs changing... Oh that's good! In 37 you went into the combination of violins. Very Nice. I am also noticing that you are not repeating yourself... besides the guitar, but that is the main chorus so it doesn't really count. Ok, heres what I think you (and I) should do here. I should add a synth in there from one of my Ambient songs. But first things first, this is a very good song, and I will be very glad to participate in adding on to it. 10/10 5/5. Contact me on your response to me adding a synth. (Like the ones from (::Rebirth Of Stars::) would be the best I think...)
Cosmos8942 responds:
Mmm first off this song does repeat in upon itself a bit...but in a good way. You would add in a synth from one of your songs? That is actually flattery in of itself, your synths are quite well thought out and demonstrated in your work. Its a pity I can't do that with pads ><...yet :D. Hmm...I wonder if I still have the original for this one...? I will have to look for it though don't count on it ><.
Thanks though! Once again!! O.O
-AJ-
Very good overall, but a few things...
Well, to begin with, the percussion was a bit weak. It wasn't particularly well put together, and it sounded really soft. This sorta hurt the track, because it really seems like a more reserved sounding song could've used some nice contrasting, hard hitting percussion.
Otherwise, the main melody and structure were both good, if a tiny bit repetitive. You did vary it up quite a bit, but it didn't really go anywhere. I kept expecting some big conclusion or exclamation mark or something to come up, but it didn't. Additionally, the ending was weak. A poor transition into what seemed like a tacked-on outro.
Still, I did like the overall sound of most of the voices you used, and there went together perfectly. It's pretty sophisticated sounding actually, and seems like its very well written. So you did do a very good job with the main parts of the track.
Keep it up.
Cosmos8942 responds:
Starting at the top,
Wow, someone that says that the percussion was weak. (Do you use vista...I noticed on my friends computer that with vista running that things just seem to sound different...but probably just me ><). You know, you are the only person that has said that the percussion was weak, but to each their own.
Agreed there :), it took me too long to put the main part(s) of the song together that I don't think I am going to be making something this complicated for sometime. Ending are not really my strong point though, I am much better at the introductions to songs then what I place in at the end. I have no idea why this is...but with the edit button in place I might go and revise a couple things.
Well...it seems that there is just a couple things wrong with this piece, and those can be fixed easily enough, thing is I kinda like it the way it is...so yeah >.>.
Thanks for the review though, almost always appreciated ;]/
-AJ-
Now onto my next project...
Very nice!
Turn some of the instruments down a tad.. LOL i ended up having to turn my sound down.. when it all hits at once it just wow.. Blew my mind haha good stuff i'm loving the sound to this!
Cosmos8942 responds:
Actually, I kinda wanted it to be loud...sure you didn't have 'that' sound turned up a bit high anyhow? XD...oh well, what can ya' do...it is supposed to send a shiver down your spine :P.
You Have Made A version 4 RPG Maker?
Cuz i have one
xD
Cosmos8942 responds:
Huh? What happened?...I am not completely sure I know what you mean =.=...
Bah...you gave me a 8/10 and thats all that matters XD
-AJ-
Well, okay, maybe not but it makes me feel good :P
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