Well this one here was a bit on the slow side of things but I did like the slowness of it there are some things you could do to speed some parts but that might not be your intent, I do like the style here but maybe some small build up here or there just a few points that would take it away from the mainstream flow.
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You have a nice mainstream flow here and while thats notbad, you could ad some Build-up points here or there or even just one or two for something different.
I love the sound of the crackling vinyl in the beginning. Great guitarplay, and the flute is a nice mystical addition to the whole thing. One of the best tracks I've heard in a long time now, reminds me of Metallica somehow, keep up the good work!