I respectfully Disagree BreeD
the melodies don't seem to be conflicting. if they are, then just remember it ndoesn't matter if the notes go together or not, either way it tells something. just something different.
I will say that it got a bit busy, which is probably what you were going for. the 3 steps down was a good idea, and the 3xOsc is yes, less... O.O ... MAH EARZ
but the main meoldies and apregiations are good. I especially like the bassline. maybe a tone down the perc a bit.
too many arpeggios, redo it again cuz they could make something really pretty if they werent conflicting melody patterns