Like the first chords going on here.
Mixing wise it sounds like it's been soundgoodized. Over compressed. Try to mix your track well before you do that. Make sure reverbs have clean low end, cut it off about 250 hz, etc. Shorten any tails.
I do like that little dissonant diddy we end with. It goes well with the bassline.
I would bring out your percussion more -- by turning everything else down a little, and also, if you're going to use guitar synths, you can use a technique called double tracking with different amp and cab simulators for each track, then humanize the notes slightly differently, or even use different guitar patches, and it will sound more spacious/better.
You can also look up gated reverb for snares.
Enjoyed the piece. Keep em coming. Thanks for coming out to NGUAC!