third song ever, but i actually made my own sounds for once, kinda bad but, help is good=]
needs some work
most of it was pretty good. it needs something though in the line of a melody or some thing that stays relatively the same throughout the music. in short i agree with the previouse person. also i think that it shows promise so don't give up.
well for one, im not giving up anytime soon! i know i can do bettermyself, i did that in a matter of 30 mins. but the hardest part for me is, i want a happy souding rave sound to it. its really hard for me so i end up changing throughout the song. i think ill try giving myself "time" to make a song rather than wanting to make one and ending up doing a bad job. thanks for the help.
Hm....
The chord progression is a little strange. It's not something i'm used to, that's for sure. It also lacks the "musical glue" most trance songs needs. It just seems to jump from idea to idea. Keep working on it, you'll eventually find instruments and ideas that better suit you.
thanks nal. =] all help is in fact, very helpful to me, and i kinda figured i shoulda stuck with just one of my ideas instead of swtiching towards 50 seconds. ill keep at it and eventually i hope im in the right column, not the recently added one. hah =]
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