not enough loudness.
also this is kinda techno'ish
the intro waas really nice. though the pad that came in after seemed too loud, and the lead synth [the high one that folllows that electric-guitar-esque thing] is lame on its own, so forget about that interlude. Together though, it sounded very retro and cool. this was actually a pretty decent song imo, but it needs more variety and better mastering.
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thx a lot for the review. i just got madtracker2 two days ago so im still learning how to use it properly. the main thing right now that im working on is finding the right instruments for the songs. outside of the computer techno stuff, i play guitar an my brother plays drums, so eventually im gonna try to work it all together. btw, checking out ur stuff now :]