This is incredibly metal, and I'm sorry that people who don't know anything about metal are voting on this. Metal only sounds good to metalheads. The rhythms were very cool. While I agree that this would sound much better with real instruments, I think you can get by with computer-generated effects. The only thing I really have to complain about is the ending. It sounds like you weren't finished but submitted it anyway.
Hey, thanks man. That's one of the things I was thinking about rewriting for this tune. It actually reverses at the mid-point in the song, but I liked a lot of the rhythms and such in it I was thinking about adding more. But, yeah, thanks.
Go with something else...
Try maybe techno or something, because Metal only sounds good with real instruments.
Well.. techno isn't really my genre, but I guess I don't really have the instruments or recording stuff to make this with real stuff. I guess I put it under metal because the rhythms are metal.
That was... Really bad.
I'm sorry, but it really sucked.. And it hurts in my ears. Please, try to do better, or quit heave metal.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.