I liked your created instruments, this very creative way, but also to wanted, to make it a little longer and didn't end so abruptly at the end.

hmmm dude

a fucking potential on this one

Too cool!

Very good song. I liked the sweep at the beginning, and all the synths were really well done. I especially liked that synth that sounds a little like an electric guitar which first came in at 0:13, and the main synth was really cool too. Some louder or stronger percussion might give the collapse feeling in it, but the song itself already fits with the name almost perfectly anyway. The ending was quite good too. I guess I can't find any flaws in this. Here comes another 5/5 :).
10/10
5/5
Download.

I wonder if I should bother...

I've reviewed a bunch of your songs... and I say the same thing, over and over; there is nothing here to be improved. I'm getting bored saying good things! Make something bad for once!

(I'm joking. Sorry. Just keep doing EXACTLY what you are!)

this song rocks!

and so does any other song by you! yeah I really like your your music