I'm really sorry to hear that you're doing everything, then you could have blamed other people on why the scores that low. The drums are well played and the guitars not half bad. The, uhhh, bombardment of so-called vocals into the microphone however really doesn't help out the song that much; apparently something or someone's going to die... that's all I got. I mean, if you're going to scream into the mic at LEAST make it louder than the other stuff and somewhat audible. It's a nice attempt but I don't personally like it, at all. Work hard at it man.
1/10 & 1/5