I'm curious what your thought process was in making this song. It would help me give more constructive feedback and a more accurate rating, both of which would be based more on how well I thought your intent came across rather than simply by my own taste.
For example, Failing Upwards is an interesting title. Why did you pick that?
Also, the artwork you chose for your piece's thumbnail reflects a different genre than Hip Hop or Trap. I'm curious about why you chose that as well, considering the artwork in question is typical of Synthwave (and to a lesser extent, Vaporwave) rather than the genre you chose.
Speaking from my own experience, generally, if everything fits together smoothly, the piece is more focused and potentially better than it would have been.
In terms of my own taste, Trap and Hip Hop aren't really my thing. I'd like to be of more help, but as of now, I can't.
I hope this info is helpful to you. :)
More info about how I review music here: https://codefreq.newgrounds.com/news/post/1089806