Wow !!

Man this is what i call a perfect techno song. It makes sence.

Ahm... not quite

I can't agree with your choice of samples and sample treatment.

You make the same mistake I do a lot: having a song depend on turning melody lines on and off. This may work for dancefloor oriented tracks, but in all cases it's better to deliberately make lines with specific purposes over various parts of the song.

Another mistake you make, like I do: the main melody (the part what it's all about) appears too often, so that there's not much room left for tension and variation.

I DO love the breakdown around 2:30.

2/5

great song

sometimes u will be surprised by what ppl like, this song my not seem special, but it has a great toon, i love it. great job . bd :)

Nice

Pretty nice song mate. Keep it up, and check out my music if you get a chance. :]

splendide!

you did some major work into this... you have my 5 vote! keep it up!!!

J'ai vraiment aimé cete music, ne lache pas, tu es un pro
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