I can kind of see myself reminisce about the past with nostalgia. The audio in the beginning is quite immersive. However, I think the louder parts with the percussion is not what I was expecting when I read the title. It takes me out of the experience because those parts, the percussion in particular, are very in-your-face. I was expecting something a little more subdued and maybe dreamier.
In a situation like this, I think it would be beneficial for you to explain your thought process regarding this piece. If you talk about your decisions it may help me give better feedback and a more accurate rating.
Nonetheless, I hope you find this helpful. :)
More info about how I review music here: https://codefreq.newgrounds.com/news/post/1089806