that sounds lyk its just a beat of flstudio 7 pretty average. We all start somwhere try to make your own beats next time.
one big mess
it's too short and you should improve the guitar sound, but it's still better than your second one, though.
It rots, I mean that it a bad way.
like the other person said. way to messy witht the guitar. needs to be better also too short for my taste.