I like the groovy bass at the beginning, even if it is just a stock Apple loop. The synth patterns at :31 are nice, but the drums get a little lost in the mix once the texture fills out later in the piece. This piece is catchy and has some decent progression and sound design, but the harmonic content gets a little dissonant after a while and could also use some more variety. I’d like to see some more melodic development later on in the piece, and the lead synth at around 1:20 sounds a bit unpolished and cheesy in its upper range. Overall, the strongest elements of the piece are probably the cool rhythmic content and ominous mood. Keep at it, VoytekPavlik! :)

Mixing, mastering, and balance
1.25/2
Structure, transitions, phrasing, and variety
.75/1.5
Melody, tonality, harmony, and texture
1/2
Instrumentation and sound design
.5/1
Emotion, atmosphere, and catchiness
1.25/1.5
Originality and uniqueness
.75/1
Overall (how do the elements above interact?)
1/1
Composite score
6.5/10

not bad

Sounds great!!! Like it a lot!