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Just to ask, can I use this song in a game? It won't be here on Newgrounds because I don't have Flash and am not eager totry and learn a sixth programming language, but it'll be on another site that I won't mention, but I can send you the link when it's done.
As the tanks roll over the dead bodies, I look up at the airplanes soaring in the sky,
intent on wiping our kind off the face of the earth. Suddenly, a large transport comes from under the water. Staring hell in the face, I look up with contempt and disgust on my face. The door slowly opens, casting a large shadow over the battlefield, as enemies pour out, we are overwhelmed. There is no chance in winning. I hear a loud noise in the crimson skies, and I watch the soaring airplanes pass by, frozen. I see a white flash of light and it is over.
Pardon my several spelling mistakes, but take note, that I am a mere eleven year old. I love your work, it helps me IMAGINE. Keep up the excellent work!
Why do i keep trying to talk to you
Your songs are just pure awesomeness, which leave me speachless.
Nice, Heres a story
I like it! Reminds me of chaos and destruction arising from every angle. Heres a story(I'm only 11 so its not too good)
The apocalypse is nearing... and the dawn will only bring the bloodshed of many foolhardy men... The Shadow King sat on a throne of shattered skull tilting a glass of blood down his throat. "The time for my vengeance have finally arrived... today, hell will show it's face upon the Kingdom of Zeranox..." (Evil wicked laugh heard in the distance as screen blacks out and shows a small kingdom) The kingdom of Zeranox was peaceful for centuries after the last Demon Wars, the Shadow King had not come and ravage the lands anymore, thus the soldiers grew weak, lazy, and pathetic. They molested woman, and grew corrupt and greedy. The king was old, weak, and had no successor. The King was upon his death bed in the Chapel of Nox... Archbishop," The king was a good man, and lived for his country as well as died for his country, and we arrive here at dawn to pay our respects to this glorious king..." (cut off) drunk Soldier," Glorious? That king was a f*cking loser, he didn't even have a kid!"... suddenly the chapel erupts in darkness... a sinister laugh is heard in the background as everyone looks towards the opening doors...
The start of corruption, the end of a once mighty empire. Perfect openings for the demon which will eventually call it home...
You've really made this a place of disgust. Horrible happenings every day, it makes me wish the Shadow King eradicates them all, maybe there is salvation yet for it. As the creator, ultimately that choice is yours to make.
Thank you for the review, i'm glad you liked it!
The end is nigh!
'Hark! Hark to the sound of their march crashing upon our land! They close in; the silent, the sightless and the deathless! They have broken us, scattered the king's armies, burned and ravaged our homes and cities!
Despair! Despair for doom itself approaches! His gaze is upon us, hidden like rats in this last great bastion! His gaze is on our king whom God hath deserted!
Lost! We are lost and abandoned by our heroes! Abandoned too by England and Spain and Rome! Our fate is to be forgotten, to be consigned to the earth forever more!
Woe! Woe are we who were arrogant, greedy and unchaste! There will be no peace here, only the cries of the dead and dying!
Woe are we! Woe is France!'
Doomsayers are fun.
In case you hadn't guessed this reminds me of the deathless march, which takes place in a story I'm writing. I really love this piece, will be most helpful, so do excuse me while I go and listen to...everything else you've uploaded :P
Doomsayers are indeed a great and entertaining element! And I must say you have written the prophecy with a very agile finesse and provocative style. I especially enjoyed Despair part. Very descriptive.
I wonder if all doom warnings are said so elegantly? Sure would make for fun listening on a Saturday night.
"Hear that Bob? We're doomed we are."
"M'yes... quite p_o"
But seriously, thank you for the review, i'm glad you liked it! I wish you the best in your story, I hope it sees the finish!
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.